"Throw it away,
Forget yesterday,
We'll make the great escape....."
He leaps,
He jumps,
He flies.
Suddenly his life flashes before him;
The nights at the club, being drunk,
Did so much damage to others
No wonder he cracked.
He feels as though he is forever falling,
Although he knows it has to end soon.
He has made the choice and life will end,
Any second now.....
And then a flash of regret!
He reaches out, attempting to grab a rock,
But it is of no avail,
His hand slips and he continues to fall.
He thinks of his beautiful wife,
His son, His daughter,
Wishing he could try again,
He hits rock ground.
A moment of shreen pain,
And then....
It all ends.
Goodbye.
Author notes
I wonder what it would be like to commit suicide....don't worry people, i'm not planning on doing it anytime soon. the picture just made me wonder. Check out the prompt picture.
A contest entry
- another. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Wow.
...Simply Me☺ -
Woow very suisidel
anyway I hope you win!
-
amazingly suicidal! Sooo sad yet okay. I like it.
*KT*
-
I love it when you write dark poetry, Kathryn. You have a real talent for it. Enough said
Muahahaha...welcome to the dark side.
Just kidding
-
-
wow, thanks.
i have been accepted to the dark side!!
*jumps up and down franticly*
maybe i should write more dark poems.....
jk.
-
-
This poem is well written and shows perfect emotions toward the reader. Suicide to me a gateway out of hell, and is something that you should be able to wonder about without having shit said to you. I love these line"He reaches out, attempting to grab a rock,
But it is of no avail, His hand slips and he continues to fall." They just grabbed my heart and wouldn't let go. I truely love this poem. It just Amazing In every way. There is no way that you could make any changes to try and make it better. Cuz its the best poem, I ve read in a while. Keep writing. You have great Talent.
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
