I’m a fighter
Will resist in this world
You might touch me, scratch me
But won’t break me
I’m a fighter
I’ve seen it all
My soul withstood every bit of it
I’m a fighter
Thank the few kind ones dearly
That are helping me healing
For the patience and solace and understanding
Without you I wouldn’t be who I am today
You’ve made me strong enough to be
A fighter
Thank all the ones
That left me alone in my pain
For showing me how important it is to take care of myself
Without you I wouldn’t be who I am today
You’ve made me get through this on my own as
A fighter
Thank all the ones playing me
Ripping out my heart
For making me strong
Without you I wouldn’t be who I am today
You’ve made me
A fighter
Thank all the ones
That have treated me like dirt
For teaching me to bear this
Without you I wouldn’t be who I am today
You've taught me to be
A fighter
For today I am a stronger person
Soul able to persist all the pain this world has to offer
This world still holds enough torment
My soul will still carry home scars
But now I know I won’t die from it
For now I know
I’m a fighter
Will resist in this world
You might touch me, scratch me
But won’t break me
I’m a fighter
I’ve seen it all
My soul withstood every bit of it……
Please tell me what you think
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wow
This is just... great! You took the words right outta my mouth. Everything I've ever thought, it's in here. great job.
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Fine!!!
Apart from the strength and power of expression the others already have stated (and which I support) I like how you keep including the fighter theme throughout the poem. Greets Götz
PS. Christina Who?
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Yes, we fall and have fallen, but that's just life, isn't it? Only the truly Strong just keep getting back up again, every time even stronger... every time a lesson learnt.
I really love the impact of this powerful piece, the internal strength and resistance to take a fall for anybody who stands in the way!Awesome ! Thanks for sharing!
Ron ;)
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That was just brilliant. Wonderful writing. Yes, the experience you have with people throughout your life builds up the fighter in you. I could feel the determination and power within these words. Very very good indeed. Keep writing.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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Excellent strength and determination in this!! What doesn't break us, surely does make us stronger! Reminded me of Christina Aguilera's song Fighter!
You go girl!!
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Rally the troops, raise the standards, blow the bungle, beat the drums and strait the gate. Its time to stand tall and scream defiance. I truly like the hard determination of this poem. Its a battle cry. Great poem.
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Oh this is perfect!!! This is everything, just so hard to explain in words, shows how strong you struly are, if you have an album, this will be your single, this is such an anthem...
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This is strength in words!!! We all have to learn to be a fighter to make it in this world...wonderful poem!!! Blessings to you always!!!
Az
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