When you look at yourself
What do you see?
Is there any part inside
That resembles me?
Did I leave an imprint in your soul?
Or foot prints on your heart?
Do you remember what it was like
Before you tore it apart?
When it was just you and me
In our secret spot
No one else in the world
Just me, you, and the pot
I can still remember
How you felt inside
And I’ll always remember
The first time you lied
I could never loose my value
Isn’t that what you said?
Because right now I am feeling
Like to you I’m dead
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Me For Who I Am. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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wowowowowowowowow!!! you did a gr8 job! this sounds like someting id write. good job and good luck in my contest.
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I hope you've made your mark, as I hope I've made mine too. I love the first stanza, I think that it's very true.
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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