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Forever...

I will keep forever holding on
My passion in You, my Lord.
Your fire consumes my willing heart
Through Your love I am restored…

I will keep forever serving You
My faith and hope renewed.
As You draw out the person
That to You will remain true…

Through Your one and only Son
My healing is secured
My debts have been repaid
For all the wrong I’ve ever done
Your sacrifice was made…

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  • grannyeri gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Belated welcome to AP. Glad to see you reading, commenting, writing - hope you enter some contests and take some classes from the great poet instructors on this site. Wonderful sentiments expressed so well in these lines. Easy to read and understand as well. Good flow and strong message shared.


    • Dreanne
      April 2, 2008
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      Thanks!

      I appreciate your encouragement. Have only recently found the courage to share what I write, and it is my hope that I will improve as I go along...