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Insanity

You know you're insane
When you hear your name
When no one else hears.
This rewrites your fears.

When you breeched insanity's walls
And you take so many falls,
You can hear your spirit break
And your heart goes blank.

When you wish for bleeding,
Insanity is succeeding.
When your hate and anger
Takes over, you're done for.

When your mind is a cloud
And your heart passed out,
You can't remember feelings
And you dread the knife's sheathing.

When you're terrified of friends
And don't trust family and kin,
Loneliness will kill
And fear will spill.

The voices in your head
Will quietly spread
Throughout your mind
And they won't be kind.

Author notes

Okay...I'm not emo...I was, but I quit! I'm not this insane anymore, but its in the back of my mind at all times.

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  • twlightlove
    March 23, 2008

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    wow nice piece i know where your getting at i used to be emo too but its a really good poem
    keep up the good work


  • Zephyr Irida
    March 15, 2008
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    I LIKE!

    LITTLE INSANE, BUT I LIKE ^_^