Water drops float in midair,
Time has frozen over and it shows.
Beneath the icy choke-hold lies a
Breathing heart that has pumped
Its last remaining breath.. Oh
How dead she is now.
The frozen waterfall is so beautiful,
Yet it is so dead and it shows.
Above the icy choke-hold lies a
World of liveliness, alive as it
Circles the frozen waterfalls;
But soon the Sun will pull through.
The Sun, oh how she shines;
So perfect her glow that if you look
It will most definitely blind.
The frozen tears of the waterfall bask
In her brilliant radiance, and move
Once more, alive.. once more.
Author notes
Come alive.
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you.
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I have a pond with a man made stream which has a waterfal and your poem discribes the winters freezing actions on the stream and its small waterfall. excellent write (HM)
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Thank you.
Thank you for your comment. =)
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That was good! ^__^ It made me think of Neverland, for some reason. I tihnk there were waterfalls represented in that place.
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Thank you.
Hehe, thanks! I'm glad it reminded you of something that you idolize. This makes me happy. ^___^ Thanks again, Freya~
-- Binary
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