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Freedom

Freedom


Freedom from Stress
Freedom from your drama
freedom from you whining
Never knew how sweet freedom
from you would be


Freedom from the nightmares
freedom from all the bad feelings
freedom from the blame
freedom from the hurt


Sweet is the air i breath
in my freedom


As I look across at the bridge
that leads to you
I strike the match and toss it
and turn and walk away
and never look back


I take a deep breath and

whats that I smell?


Sweet sweet freedom


Freedom from you

Author notes

This is one of my personal favorites because it came at a point in my life when i became free from someone who's chapter was finished in my life and i just never realized how good it would feel.
Picture from
http://sab687.deviantart.com/art/Freedom-41286389

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  • dustytiger
    November 15, 2008

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    i love this!! i can very much relate to what you are talking about getting your freedom back is the best feeling in the world, best of luck in the contest


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    That picture and this poem together...are absolutely mesmerizing in the emotions they evoked in me. I sensed that there was a deep story hidden within these verses and I then saw your notes to clairify it.

    Thank you for entering.
    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 29, 2008

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    I love the power in this poem. Thank you for sharing your favorite poem with me, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Lexie - gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    FANTASTIC

    Baby i LOVE LOVE LOVE this write!
    its one of my favorites too!
    your an incredible talent girl, and this holds a powerful punch!


    • Firequeen
      March 15, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed hun
      I love this one is deffinatley one of my favs.
      Thank you for the compliment baby


  • Gentle Chaos Lion
    March 15, 2008

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    Whining drama is a stress. Those bridges are best burnt. Poetic leap into freedom. Nice to smell that rickety bridge with all it faults and creaks as it falls into the river of sorrow.

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