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Floral Tomb

You lie among the dead flowers
You feel safe in your floral womb,
Your inverted body becomes nothing
Your book, a graveyard stone tomb.

Forever dissolving into oblivion
Your invading into deeper darkness,
The master of creation summons you
You feel you cant go, your heartless.

Your reflection converts your face
Into little shards of fake silk lace.

Your support system is around you,
Their faces wild and lively;
And yet they cannot read your expression
Your eyes shout 'please someone, help me'.

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  • Moons Lunar Angel
    March 23, 2008
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    Thankyou for entering my contest and I wish you luck. Lil :F