People,places and all the thoughts my mind chases.
Every little happening leaves its little traces.
Is reality real or is it what i feel?
Is there a God and does he know the deal?
Is life what we make it or does it happen anyway?
Should we go to work or should we learn to play?
Should we all conform or should we just run wild?
Will i be a man or will i always be a child?
If i mind my P's and Q's will i see a pearly gate?
Will i go to hell if i fill myself with hate?
Will i find a spiritual path that brings me back again?
Would i prefer nothingness or rather live with pain?
These questions are a wonderment, a plate of food for thought!
Will they be conclusions or will they all be taught?
Maybe they'll be answered,i will have to wait and see.
I think that it could take a while,so for now i'll just be ME!
A contest entry
- The Key To Enlightenment : Love ? Wisdom ? Both ? by maa.
543 points, ended April 6, 2008, 13 entries
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wonderful !!!
I love the way you responded to the prompt through questions, questions, and more questions ...
the attitude of "I don't know" has always been the perfect state in order to attract divine guidance ... and I am convinced that synchronicity is already kissing you on your forehead ...
thank you so much for helping us to open up to our childlike state of curiosity and innocence through your verse ...
all the best,
maa
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Amazing
Stunning writing, and many times I have asked the same questions. This was just amazing writing here. Well done indeed. Keep writing, for you are good.
All the best my friend
Wayne Leon
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re:questions!
I thank YOU my friend!For those words, comming from someone of your writing calibre,mean a lot to me.I shall endeavour to put more pen to paper as it comes to me.meanwhile i shall feed my head on all the very good stuff here!Cheers man!
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My mind boggled!!
I question things all the time.I will just hand this over to the universe and see what it brings!
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