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Friday night

You whisper so hot and heavy
you cry out to give you more
You scream take me on the table
you moan for it to be on the floor

Your breathing get labored and quick
you tell me those nasty little desires
You tell me how badly you want me
to come and extinguish your fires

You writhe in slippery pleasure
hands tracing over your skin
Trapped in lust and passion
diving deeper and deeper in sin

I can't believe you found me
or how you scream and holler
My little late friday night
crazy obscene phone caller

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  • Malabu
    April 21, 2008

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    lol...It was probably some 10 year old lol...this cracks me up...but then again I wonder where my mind was going with this steamy write...
    haha...
    smiles
    Mal


  • dcpoetmusician
    March 27, 2008
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    HA! didn't see that coming my friend. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Thank you for the laugh.


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    HAHAHA This was just amazing! well done, and all the best in the contest Loved the ending, great !