Another day, another failure;
Is what she only 'accomplishes'.
Or so they say...
Another day, another wrong;
Is what she only 'does'.
Or so she says...
But to love the unlovable;
Is not so 'unbearable'.
As they say...
To treat your fellow kin with hatred;
Is not so 'accomplishing'...
As they would think it is.
I love her, imperfections and all;
It is not so 'terrible'...
As they would call it.
She starts to speak of their lies;
To which I reply, "They say and think
A lot of wrong things don't they?"
To treat your fellow kin with love;
Is not so 'horrible'...
As they thought.
Author notes
Life is too short to hate on ANYONE.
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I believe you wrote this poem about me originally, didn't you? And others, of course. This happens to both of us sometimes.. it sucks when people hate on us. :/ xD
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Yes, I did.
Yeah, it does suck.
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Welcome to AP
I love the thought behind this one and yes, it shows a LOT of thought and input...very intelligent and very well written piece!
Thank you for sharing and welcome to all poetry!!!
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Thank you!
Thank you very much for the warm comments and warm welcome! =)
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Excellent
I give this poem a massive rating of good, It is not very often you come across someone who would stay with another when so many would put them down. In life you can but follow your heart and if feelings are saying that your not bothered then bravo go with them and be happy. another excellent write.
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Thank you.
I dedicate it to my friends who are put down by their family, and my girlfriend especially.
Thank you so much for the comment!!
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Great!
I also think this one was really good. ^_^ Im bad at ConCrit but I'll try my best. you might want to use "terrible" instead of 'terrible'. It looks better. Or maybe it's just me. Sorry. ^^;; I love it either way. -
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Thank you.
Thanks! It's okay, no need to be sorry, Freya! I like hearing what other people have to say. As long as they are not harsh about it. =) I don't use "terrible" instead of 'terrible' .. I forget why. o.o; It's just a way I do it sometimes.. with only one quotation mark per side of a word I am trying to emphasize. However, I will start putting two, like regular (and modern) writing. It may help the reader!! lol It is used in J. R. R. Tolkien books, I believe.. the style that was used in this poem. But thank you for your time to comment and your thoughts on my poem, it is appreciated!
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