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Voices

No human words nor
Words of a higher entity
Could overpower the voices
In my head; nothing can
Stop me from pulling the
Trigger tonight.

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Suicide is never the answer. Never give in.

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  • subliminalverses
    April 5, 2008
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    I feel that way sometimes.. my voices have been bothering me as of late, too. xD Anyway. Love it!


  • RogueShadow
    March 15, 2008

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    you know very well that i love your poetry, and this is no different. very well done! XD there is just not one problem i can see with the poem, other than it being too damn good! (okay that's not a bad thing...but you get the point)

    nicely done.

    • Binary
      March 16, 2008
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      Thank you.

      Your comment means a lot to me, especially coming from someone such as yourself! You inspire most of my poetry, you know. lol Hehe. Thanks!