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Broken Glass

The mirror's broken glass
Laid there on the floor silently.
The culprit looks into the shards
That were broken -- reflecting her
Broken heart.

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Short and sweet follow-up of "Mirror, Mirror".

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  • subliminalverses
    April 5, 2008
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    Love love love it. XD I can relate to that at times, too.


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 15, 2008
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    A good expression of words here used to reflect the feelings of a heart that is shattered. The idea of looking at a reflection in a broken mirror works really well and the poet has really catured what a broken heart feels like well done (HM)


    • Binary
      March 15, 2008
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      Thank you again.

      Thanks again! You are very right. I was portraying that emotion of being broken and you caught on. Not many people can relate, but you do it fairly well (and quick!). Thank you. (As for the previous comment, sorry I didn't help out!! lol It's okay that I got the wrong message, I do it as well sometimes. Plus, I was offline~ Sorry! Glad it got sorted out.)