Unicorns, castles, sailing ships
butterfly's, hero's and chocolate chips,
heavens rainbow colors, shades and hues
fantasy's of love's sky blue,
slumbering angels innocence
harmony halo's of love.
Enchanted realms gum ball bubbles
floating clear of mundane troubles
blown by breath of natures themes
to fill the hearts of children's dreams.
Author notes
50 W Picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF quickie by Age of Rain.
500 points, ended March 16, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful upside down Bronze contest :) by paulcreates.
1200 points, ended April 5, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The words float nicely in this write. Thank you for entering.
Paul -
Excellent
This was so amazing and well expressed. Such marvelous images. Congratulations on the bronze.
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"Harmony halo's of love" That line really jumped out at me. Your piece is simple, sing-songy, but so very beautiful. I love the depth and and elegance of this piece. Well done and best of luck
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Simple put you have taken this prompt and made it your own in the words you have penned.*rsoe* Good luck in the contest. Excellent piece.
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Beauty!!
Wonderful weaving of words and rhyme~
Marvelous take on the picture prompt
The images touch the inner child and brings
forth a smile
Keep that quill dancing~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Oh my gosh I absolutely love this!!!! Incredibly well done!!! I am in awe here.......Excellent, excellent, excellent!!! Best of luck!!!
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