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Working Mom

Smells coming from the kitchen,
smile on her face,
favorite dishes come out
after the day of preparation.
Love emanating
from the warmth of the meal,
Mom works so hard,
then to fill our stomachs
and rub our backs.
She reads a book
right beside me,
as we eat her warm cookies.
Sitting in front
of her whirring sewing machine
she stitches up another quilt
for a birthday,
a friend,
or a wedding.
Always working,
always a kind word,
always my favorite Mom.

A contest entry

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    That's A Mom!!!!!!

    Always busy doing for others...generations past and generations to come....What tribute to your mother just lovely!!!Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~~


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 13, 2008
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    This is sweet and precious. Lovely poem for a lovely persom. Great job. Good Luck
    Butterfly


  • twinkling of an eye
    March 15, 2008

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    Aw, this is wonderful! Your love for your mom is evident in every word, and your description makes me feel as if I know her. Thank you for entering this; I'm adding to the finalists list!


  • Ja Vorbesc
    March 15, 2008

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    Sweet poem. I'd be happy to be your mom!
    It brings out feelings that say, 'yeah, my mom does that. Now why haven't I written her a poem yet?' I should get to that...