gently, his eyes
undress my thoughts
and read my words
before they sink in the black ink
he tastes the vowels
on the tip of my tongue
breathes each syllable
when inhaling my scent
and weaves verses
on my bare skin
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Hi MariGoes,
Thank you for reading my silly haiku attempts. They were done in jest..I have some better ones ...you were highly recommended to me so I have read almost all of your haiku I could find. It is all wonderful and I have so much more to learn.
This is a wonderful sensual poem you have written here. You are as good as I have been told...I am looking forward to reading more...Darlene
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Mcsteamy~
This one to me was on the steamy side....
Loved loved loved it......
I agree the less said the better
You have certainly done so with this poem sis
Hugs
Susan~~~~~
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wow, that's some steamy wordsmanship!
as always i love poems that say a lot with a few words and this poem feels like it is so much bigger than it is on the page. Thanks for the read as always mari.
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One needs not outer sight if they can read...braille...
living breaths
string together with "pants"
dressed, with love
Hugs...Eddy
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thats really beautiful
fabric of love
woven on skin
while warp and weft
are excluded for verses
beautiful
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"and weaves verses
on my bare skin"
sighs - this is sexy & gorgeous, what a beautiful sensual mood you capture in this poem, I love it!!
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Wow, I'm speechless. It was a beautiful read.
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I fell with my ass down the cellar of the chalet in the 'Ardennen' and my ribs hurt
lol 
that has nothing to do with your poem but yeah
I love you
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Oh wow. this poem flows silky smoothe just like the background it lays on. I liked it. Short, smoothe, and well written.
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It's as if things have come full circle.
There is nothing else I really choose to say right now. You know I admire you and your poetry, anything else I'd type would feel cheap and pathetic right now and I'd like to avoid that at all cost.
10,000
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fingerpaint and silk! Ohhh!
...when love speaks
comes waves upon the moments
of magenta heartbeats
Mari, you verses are magical!
Karen
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Yours are, sweet Karen
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Applauding!!
I'm having one of my "Latina" moments! So much intelligence, and passion displayed here. You should see the look in my eyes. Love this background too... my favorite color(one of them, anyway). Think I'll keep this one... if it's alright with you, of course.
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supple sweet
you got it like that
damn i love this
simply pure
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sensual prose draped over the shoulder of a tender thought. enticing write dear! it's so great to read you again. (i've been away) take care, now
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Absolutely beautiful! Wonderful description with the tasting, breathing, inhaling... Love this!
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Oh My Word!!
Now I must say
I dropped my drink for I was getting all kinds of images and trying to function at the same time...
Seemed sorta dangerous
Loved this!!
So keep that quill dancing and continue to spill more ink pretty please
Woooooooooooo Hoooooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Oh i love this, especially those last two lines.... I could feel the gentle, loving words his breath wrote upon your skin. I have written a very similar poem like this one - "a wish, literally spoken" - so we are in sync, Mari!! We have a saying in Afrikaans about tasting, called the "tongtippietoets" - the tongue-tip test"... see, where you took my mind. This is lovely, so soft the calligraphy of touch here.
~ Nicolette
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reminds here of Eleven Minutes, Paulo Coelho the artist and the girl, seeing so much more...this is beautiful, these words and images show so much, have such honest feelings in them, wonderful...PK
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Wow- I just love this metaphor! Language! This is simply beautiful... overflowing with beauty and poetry... the weaving, breathing and inhaling... beauteous writing.
- namita
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