The majestic sunrise coming through my window,
The colors casting a glow
on the lone picture
sitting on my desk
of my unforgotten love.
The clouds rolling by
the world not stopping
as I relive the memories
of my unforgotten love.
A birds song,
sweet high melody
drifting into my thoughts
that are somewhere far away,
somewhere with my unforgotten love.
A contest entry
- Romance with Nature (Triple Tanka's) by InBetweenThoughts.
750 points, ended April 12, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Long distance. by QueenCiar.
500 points, ended October 28, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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this is super cute!
thanks for entering and good luck! :] -
Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT
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This is a wonderful poem, though it does not follow the rules..it must be of 3 Tanka's in combination to be included in the judging..please resubmit a triple tanka! Have a great day, Ken IBT
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