Smoothness of the lake
Touched by the morning sunlight
Warms me to my soul
Loon cries out echoes of song
That will stay with me all day
Wondrous green forest
Tapestry of greens and black
Breathes life in the wind
Caressing my ears with sound
A soft message in whisper
Heavens of soft blues
Does complete the perfect scene
Walking in a dream
Mother Natures beauty rests
Always in my memories
A contest entry
- Romance with Nature (Triple Tanka's) by InBetweenThoughts.
750 points, ended April 12, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Thank you for your beautiful entry and a wonderful walk with you. The imagery is great as is your form and counts..well done, thank you, best wishes..Ken IBT
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