Oh God
you must not belong to this cosmos
not acclimating the lifestyles of this globe
while I belong to this earth
knowing the ordeals of the passages here
except when I do try to intercept you
discovering euphony and contentment
with the lucubration that I located you
without the mousetraps in connectivity
honoring my prayer time as a sunny span of life
Oh God...
Author notes
Prompt..
" Me time is the time that I spend for my self alone
doing things that I like most"
No hassles-- no bickering ----from other sources
like family and friends
A contest entry
- Me time by Purush.
550 points, ended March 29, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Meaning Of Life by sleepingINblackRain.
380 points, ended March 31, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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CONGRATS
Congrats on your HM my friend.Your write is certainly deserving of such an award.You have been a pleasure to read.
Take care.
~Angel~
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I enjoy a wide vocabulary but the wording seems pushed, too complicated
but i supose it suits the topic
Intertesing write thanks for entering -
truly understand "... sunny span of life ..." . my goal is to carry the prayer throughout the day ... hopefully, one day.
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LOt of spiritual thoughts. well written . All the best
"you must not belong to this cosmos
not acclimating the lifestyles of this globe"
with the current trend these words are very true .
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VERY WELL RELATED THE CONTEXT WITH spiritual thoughts
in aesthetic parlance.
Irespect the texture of your verse, a neatly woven one
All the best in my contest -
Thoughtful!
When I pray...God is never of the earth
yet it is his creation...
'honoring my prayer time as a sunny span of life'
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