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This Heart's Shelter Missed

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"I cried twice today."
alone in the wind and rain
this heart's shelter missed











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  • Amera gold member
    March 15

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    This does everything a Haiku should do. You used nature to lend depth to human emotion.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • rhondasail
    March 15
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    Soothing composition...feels...strong...elemental. Peace, Rhonda


  • sunshinegirl
    March 15

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    What a great job you did on this one!! WOW!! And the thoughts I captured in this one, is one I really needed right now!! Great job!!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 15
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    Wonderfully said, picture perfect.

    Passions


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 15
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    thank you for the shoulders you give me...

    love, lane

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