Love is a stained glass window,
So beautiful.
But you can't see through it.
Your heart is broken,
The glass shatters,
And only then will you see.
A contest entry
- Write me your best poem yet by Loveandblessings2u.
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Damn! This is exceptional. Keep up the good work.
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pretty short, i know there was no length requirement, but i feel you didn't quite convey your point well enough.
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Good job. It's true...but my stained glass window in my room is see-though XD
Great job though, keep it up, you!
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WoW your words are so true.
The message you write in thes few words
are beautiful, yet sad all at the same time.
Great message you are sending out.
Good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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So True!
If there ever was a metaphor that fit love and broken hearts, this is it! I love this piece. It speaks to me, and it says volumes more than just the words here on this page. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem. Very well written!
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