With fluttering wings
birds fly high into the skies
happily always
they track their direction too
and reach the sanctuaries
Far away from nests
they start their journey on seas
no luggage and food
How they make on seven seas
God only knows the secret
They return to nests
after the season comes to end
with added power
stimulating energy
and happiness in the soul
Author notes
picture prompt----
credited to;
http://jonathanhaynes.com/geese-flying-into-sun.jpg
A contest entry
- Romance with Nature (Triple Tanka's) by InBetweenThoughts.
750 points, ended April 12, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Very Nice
Your poem is well written. Many times when I lived in the North, I wondered how the birds knew what path to fly when going South.
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Thank you for your wonderful entry..I would say determination may be their biggest drive, though may it be their will to go home again...appreciate your write, thank you best wishes, Ken IBT
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