You sit at the back of the class...
I see you coming to me...
You stare my black eyes deeper...
I see the words written in your eyes...
You said and whisper it close to my face, "I LOVE YOU"...
I said, "Sorry,,but you have a bad breath..."
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475 points, ended April 20, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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LOL. Now this is funny!! I loved the imagery, I can just imagine...
Thanks for posting in my contest. -
HAHA!!! Omg, that is the greatest response everrr.
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Hehe bad breath, gotta be the worst thing. Just shows love doesn't conquer all...lol. A great piece, good luck in the contest
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