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Death by oral hygiene (Adult content)

Cissie woke to the new day, morning birds singing
She rolled over to find the bed space beside her empty once more.
She stayed like that, lost between thought and wondering until she herd the shower
And the sweet sound of her girlfriends tuneless singing
She smiled, shrugged off that cold feeling again and got up.


The coffee was good and hot and Kelly had already prepared bacon
She was sat eating when she entered the kitchen,
"Good morning hunny" Cissie said smiling
"Oh hello sweet" Kelly replied but didn't look her way
The happy feeling left too quickly and that cold chill was back again dominating as always


"Kelly, is everything okay"?

She asked the question but already knew the answer
It sounded in her mind before her love said the words

"I'm fine hunny"
"Okay" she replied, what more could she say.

She crossed the kitchen, kissed her Girlfriend softly on the cheek, "will you be home later"
Kelly looked up from the morning paper

"Yeh, I don't have work so I'm going to do some stuff around here"
"Well I'll see you later then"
Cissie grabbed her bag, ignoring the lack of reply and left for the office.


The morning was a white wash of paper work and bullshit; all she could think about was Kelly. Why did everything feel so wrong?
She felt inept and alone not to mention afraid, they had only been together a year,
But Kelly was her life.  Had the magic that was so vibrant at first left already?
Cissie couldn't accept that, there had to be something she could do.
She smiled at herself wondering why she hadn't thought of it already.


She dialled the extension "Hello, Mandy Mashalls office" came the dull reply
"Hey Mandy she said, girl I need to take the day off"
"Cissie? Her manager replied, is everything okay hun"?
"Mandy I'm going to ask Kelly to marry me" the words were out and she hardly believed them herself, but it felt good, better than it had in a long time.
"Oh hunny, I'm so happy for you"!!
"So it's okay"? "Yes" Mandy replied, her joy obvious, "Just let me know how it goes girl"
With that she collected her things and headed in to town, she would need a ring.


Cissie found something perfect in the high street jewellery store. She took out her cell phone to call Kelly, and then thought better of it
I want to surprise her she thought.
Excitement bubbled as she made the short journey home; she rounded the corner to their small, ground floor apartment and stopped dead.

 

The familiar truck parked outside brought a ravine of dread and loss and helplessness,
She sat for a moment with her head in her hands, just a passing visit she decided. But still she parked her car out of sight and walked to the rear of her home.
She stood for a long time, numb from the inside out.


She could hear them, his deep moans, her soft lustful tones
Her girlfriend was inside their home, fucking her ex husband. And Cissie stood like an idiot not wanting to disturb them for fear of being rude.
How long had it been? How long had she lived this deluded fantasy life?
She took the ring from her pocket and looked at it.


Maybe she would still say yes?  What would she do without Kelly?
She sank then, as if the weight of it all had just become too heavy and sobbed for what seemed like forever, all the time they graced her with their cries of passion.
The front door opening brought her back to earth and she moved out of sight.


"I'll be back tomorrow"

he said smugly, before getting into his truck
She didn't hear Kelly's reply; she was trying to hold herself together.
Cissie waited a while before entering the house, she could hear Kelly in the bedroom.
Probably changing the sheets….


That was it, the moment pain and anguish turned to rage
She didn't speak but walked into the room
Kelly turned startled "your home early"! Came her sudden reply, and she was indeed changing the sheets. Cissie could smell sex in the air, hot sweaty Fucking and she gritted her teeth to stop herself from screaming.


"I came home to spend time with you" She replied.

Kelly smiled, but there was no emotion in her eyes. They were as dead as her bleached hair, what the fuck had she been thinking? Cissie thought.

"Well I just have to shower first" Kelly replied
"That's okay" said Cissie. "I can wait"


She followed Kelly into the bathroom, and watched her undress, all she could think about was his hands on that body, if she kissed her now she would still taste him there. The rage that was dormant for so long was now erupting, spewing fiery bile like acid rain against the inside of her heart, exposing the wild demon that hides within each and every one of us.


Its power overwhelming, noxious and its fury dominating all rational thought.
Kelly excited the shower and grabbed her robe.
Plucked her tooth brush from its holder "Brushing you teeth again"? Cissie asked
Kelly turned away from her "I can still taste my last meal" She said,

 

 

And it wasn't the words that broke that final straw, but the grin that Cisse caught unintentionally in the bathroom mirror.


"Here let me help you with that" she said, grabbing Kelly by the hair and dragging her to the floor, her arms flailed but Cissie was almost double her size and easily restrained her, she shoved the toothbrush into her mouth


"Let's see if we can clean your filthy lying whore mouth shall we" she snarled at her
Soon blood was pouring as she drove the brush deeper and deeper,
Each time Kelly gagged and choked and whimpered and it only reminded her more
Of the sounds coming out of their room,


Kelly had lost at least half of her teeth and cissie was overtaken by rage and loss
The tears poured freely and she still persisted amongst angered snarls

 

"how could you ever kiss me when this mouth was on his cock"?


"How many times did you fuck him in our bed, then pretend to make love to me in the same place"?


She looked in to Kelly's deep doe like eyes; they were the eye's she wanted to wake to every day for the rest of her life.


She took the toothbrush from Kelly's mouth, her whimpers and sobs now more audible.

"I wanted you to marry me Kelly" she whispered through her tears


Then drove the handle of the brush deep into Kelly's right eye
Pushing hard until her body stopped convulsing and the whimpering was no more.
Cissie wiped her hands on Kelly's robe and went to the bedroom dresser,


Finding exactly what she wanted she sat on the bed "death by oral hygiene" she laughed
Then placed the cold steel barrel of the gun to her head
And pulled the trigger

Author notes

Fire n Ice

words used
Dominating,
Ravine,
Erupt,
Bleached,
Bile,
Pluck(ed)
Expose,
Dormant,
Noxious,
Inept,
Delude(d)

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  • A63-Angel
    September 28, 2008
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    wow! sure didn't see that coming in the end. I loved this!!


  • PastelMoons gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    Yikes!
    this is awesome!
    Congrats on the bronze.
    I have missed you
    and your wonderful work!!!


  • PerVirtuous
    April 7, 2008
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    That's pretty dark. I like it. You have a great imagination.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    Ok I have to congratulate you on making me *cringe* The toothbrush in the eye...Bleck & ewww! You have written a great story here, with depth and detail that produced awesome visuals. I felt like I was stood next to them the whole time. At the end I knew what was going to happen, yet I still carried on reading, madness on my part that was rewarded with cringing and shudders...lol. Superbly penned, thanks for your entry and good luck


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    Wow....this is deeply disturbed but in a good way. I really liked it and I think you did well. Great job and good luck to you.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**

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