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Cheated




Your deceitful embrace
wrings my withered soul;
Redness flows down tortured heart;


I bleed dry.




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17 words "I keep bleeding"

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    So gripping and creative.... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    Aw, this is very powerful dear daughter, well done!


    Love and peace,
    mj.