Bleeding Love
Maintaining, bleeding
this intensified love.
Each beat,
each passing moment we coexist.
Our bond strengthened,
devotion unbreakable.
Author notes
It is probably cliched by oh well...lol
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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Very beautifully expressed, delicate and true. I also love the song called Bleeding Love, but yeah that's non important.
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Oh yes it is one of my fav songs
and in some degree inspired it as much as seeing the contest did...and well, my man of course 
Thank you for an encouraging comment
Cindy
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Ahhh true love is like this....well I imagine it would be
lovely write hun
Rob
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yeah I reckon it is....well it is for me and mattt lol
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Wonderful vocabulary, passionate emotion. I'm a sucker for love poems. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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I am too
Thanks Amera
Cin
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This is quite intense... brimming with passionate emotion. A very fitting reflection on the binding power of Love. Well done... thank-you for sharing.
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Thank you so much
Cindy
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ok
Hello Cindy.
Yes, I think you're right. This is a bit cliched. That's the trouble we get into when we write generic statements. Detailed, symbolic images sometimes work better, but of course, they take a lot longer to write.
have a gr8 day,
BJ.
PS It's very hot here, much tooooooo hot for autumn.
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Hi Bro
Yeah im thinking it's a bit cliched, she asked for not cliched and well thats why I didnt win hehehehe
I still like it of course...it's something cliched or not
Yeah has been way hot at coffs harbour for autumn for me lol but cooler at nights a bit more at least...we are expecting rain anyday now from all our heat...yipee bloody yeeee lol
Stay well
Cindy
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So beautifully creative... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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I liked this very much, definately outside the box. Great job.
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this is most certainly not cliche auntie your words speak so much for the prompt. its amazingly written well done
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No, not clichéd at all Cindy, a fitting entry indeed, and always a pleasure dear.
Love and peace,
mj.
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Aw, Thanks Dad
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I love this sis.. it's a great take on the prompt.. not cliched at all for others will probably have taken the prompt on a dark and heartbroken level.. where as your write speaks of love strengthening..
Fabulous!
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Yeah well , wheres the fun in writting bout being broken hearted lol
Thanks SiS, love U
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I really loved this. You have done so well here to express real, intense love. WEll done and best of luck for the contest.
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Thanx Darl
Cin
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