Softly, without sound
Coming, and Coming
Flowing down, like a stream
In an empty valley, like my heart
Author notes
sorry if it has an extra word... ...
A contest entry
- Step outside the box.......... by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 15, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully written! Short, but you didn't have to say another word! Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Tiff -
Welcome to AllPoetry
Beautifully sad in so few lines.
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~Manda
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Such emotional imagery within... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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