rapture of flowing words then I shall find
we must always remember to enjoy life
until again the short hair cramps my style
no work today, just time to play!
God made them for you and me
I shall not win
Deserving no more cry
of farting contests and smelly haze
Shame, shame, shame on you!
I really need a sunny day!
oh star
a future lies before me, drivin' down the right track
said Goosey Vader Calamity McKay
Yes! But, it is more fun to rip them off
Enough said
to help them cope another day
Author notes
Last lines of my last 17 poems!
In a list
A contest entry
- Build A Poem with the Last Lines of Your Own Poetry! FUN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow!! That's a great idea, Melodies is so smart! I love it! ha ha ha and it does kinda make sense. That just makes us crazy right? lmao I looooooooovve it.
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one hates to say it, but these things can make almost too much sense hehe
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And here I thought you just invented a new form! then I read it's a last line composition... my lord..it flowed together so perfectly...its like it was meant to be!!! well brilliant my friend... thats what this is!
doc.
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I was going to say, you are up early, too! But then remembered your time is way ahead of mine... it's just the right time for you to be up and drinking coffee and scouring AP.
Weird how it all worked out, and somehow it mentions Goosey and speaks to her! I cannot take credit, it was sent as a gift from another place flowing through me, just wish when it happened my body hadn't been invaded by the spirit and made my voice sound like a man's. Good thing it only stayed for the duration of creating this poem. 
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You're right what am I doing up at the crack of
8:00 am? but more to the point what are you doing up so very west coast early? are those bunnies making too much noise? or the birds chirping loudly? and as for channeling another spirit with a deep voice, its a good thing you got him kicked out before you sprouted a beard
or is it too late? doc.
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Hahahaha...
Well they really connected..
we must always remember to enjoy life
until again the short hair cramps my style
of farting contests and smelly haze
Shame, shame, shame on you!
LOL... Funny, Funny, Funny.
I bet you laughed when it all came together!
Good luck in the contest.
All the best,
~T.S~
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Melodies is so creative and how could I not do such an easy contest! Silly and fun, that's what she is.
Thanks for visiting and commenting and sending clappies my way.
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HON I AM IN TEARS AND MY JAWS ARE ACHING...Do you realize that you have written the PERFECT POEM as words from YOU to ME ....sheer genius folks...SHE TRULY WRITES FROM HER FART
I MEAN HEART
Have I messed it up good enough yet???
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You silly Goose! The other poem, For Now... was written just for you. This one is the last lines of the last 17 of my poems. Yet, somehow, now that I read this poem it was meant to be created just for you, too! It's full of silly hopeful thinking and even mentions your name(s)! Haha!
We have Melodies to thank for this inspirational write.
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It's been a long time
since farting on your page
It's been a long time since drinks
I hope this little ditty
REEEEALLY STINKS
Do a little dance...make a little mess
GET DOWN TONIGHT
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Yes, your ditty REEEEEEEEALLY STINKS!
A smiley face sometimes it winks
Do a little dance, make a little mess
Oh, Goosey, I must confess
this poem came from another place
but glad to put ache upon your face!
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EVEN WHEN YOU ARE 'NOT' WRITING POETRY...YOU ARE WRITING TO ME..THE ANGEL IS WATCHING US DAILY
(you are my poultice in life...pick up the speed sucker
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Goosey Vader Calamity McKay
Says "Shame, shame, shame on you!"
With open heart and open door
with friends like you
"Who could ask for more???"
I know it does not rhyme Bunnykins but...I am in here soooo much it is making me cry!! Well almost as much as the title did
MWAH
from Goosey Vader Calamity McKay
On the sea bed creeps a ginormous for Sea Mail is all I can afford...just like my roses from Steve
Wishing I could you ALL in person.
Thanks for being you MWAH
(I think I just poured my heart out in this comment...was worth it 
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a new way?
of listing, instead of titles the last line! and it works cos looking thru them there are some that immediately tickle the taste buds and make you want to read. sometimes i peep at the end of a book and ofcourse it ruins the plot.i think it works oppositely with poetry! patent the idea quick!!! but i want half the proceeds!!!! -
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Haha! Melodies gets all the credit! Too easy and fun.
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