In humility I cry
nothing grows
I wear mine with a smile
the knit knot tree
in the reflection of my room
and on them I place the blame
and it's meant for you
like I'm in outer space
I disregard
and now it's doing fine
Is where it all must start
with a smile just for you
you have witness to a cutie
in the name of Jesus Christ, Amen!
I'd leave this place in a hurry
the times with him had come to an end.
A contest entry
- Build A Poem with the Last Lines of Your Own Poetry! FUN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 15 entries
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Oh my goodness!
The religious touch is really the capstone here in this poem. 
Your poem is filled with neon-generated wild lines throughout and I love it! HAHAHA that outer space line 
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