Birth and rebirth
for my release
For a moment - bliss – windows to our soul we bare
wHirLiGigs tO cAPtuRe yOuR mInd, liKe YoU caPtuRed mY ♥
BE MINE!
Quiescent is her apex and a range of silence – required
saturates my mind
The harpist delights as you succumb
Evidence
of adoration
tonight you lose your sacred purity
Now, I give you best wishes in your demise
Suspicious
permanently attached mask
On the edge of our world only, affectionately placed
Enjoying the silence
Author notes
Contest rules: Build your poem using the last lines from 17 of your poems.
Loved the outcome!
A contest entry
- Build A Poem with the Last Lines of Your Own Poetry! FUN! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yeah... LOL
I think this part worked a treat!
Evidence
of adoration
tonight you lose your sacred purity
Now, I give you best wishes in your demise
Strange how that bit turned, I thought it was good.
)
Good luck int the contest.
All the best,
~T.S~
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an amazing idea and so creative ... this sort of thing really suits your playful nature ... and I truly love the result of your poem !!! ... makes me want to play, too !
sending you a big hug
sister maa
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Wow! kinda like a Mad Lib! You never know what kind of a story you'll end with.
Good luck.
~Donna~
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funny how these things work out.
good luck
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