The storm rolls in and all is silent,
The worlds seems chill and still like a lake
Yet soon it will be a beach in a tempest.
The love has gone with the calm
The hate comes in with the lightning
The pain reoccurrs like the thunder
The life I once had becomes this.
They say its the storm of the century
They say it will drown us all
They say it may stay forever
They think the moon is the sun
I will wait until this all really happens
I will wait for the moon and the sun
I will wait for the crash and the final one
I will wait until all that is wrong has been righted
Oh happy thunder,
Roll on,
Crash on like a Beach in the storms of potential.
Author notes
I love thunder storms
Do you think it has potential?
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now that was amazing. i absolutely love this. i love thunderstorms too which is part of why this poem is wonderful. thank you.. lol - i actually got some imagery from that too.
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nice comparisons i loved it
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you and me too ... they say a great earth quake will tumble California into the sea and that Arizona will be the coastline. Just have to wait and see. Thanks for sharing with the library. I love thunder storms too.
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Mmm this is interesting and very good i liked it alot good write and dialouge too very colorful.
Sincerely,
Lonelywolf Tasagka
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amazing!
i really like this one alot! i love the way it gives you a sence of hope at the end!
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wierdo
How can you like storms? I hate them but this is an exceltnt poem. but my fav part I could really see or invision was this
The storm rolls in and all is silent,
The worlds seems chill and still like a lake
Yet soon it will be a beach in a tempest.
I love this phrase -
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yeah, idk
i don't know how or why bit i love thunderstorms especially really intense ones
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