heaven's chandelier
temporarily dulled by
the devil's dimmer
Author notes
Haiku
Sheltered
A contest entry
- BECAUSE YOU ARE MY FAVS by Swan song.
3000 points, ended April 5, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short pieces - Prewrites Allowed. Bring the good stuff! by Amunet Wolfbane.
1000 points, ended April 1, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The image of heaven's chandelier is quite beautiful, I can see it and I like that. The piece makes good sense but to be honest the whole good/evil thing is very cliche' and overdone. What I do really like about this is that it is a haiku and that adds to the creative qualities. In that sense it is impressive
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Hey, I don't even believe in god but I wrote it... lol
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ah well that is a feat indeed It is an impressive Haiku
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Thanks you for the kind comments and the HM.
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love the brevity...killer images conjured by so few words. enjoyed this little beaut.
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Thanks and always may the Zeppelin of zested zeal appeal
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please put user name in authors box last minute switch thanks
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Last minute switch... good one. lol
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A well written haiku. I like the "heaven't chandelier' and the "devil's dimmer" great metaphors. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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A great haiku, so much said in so few words. Love the theme. All the best in the contest with it
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wow...
sometimes you still surprise me Tim...this is very stirring...on many levels...
how you packed all this into a haiku is beyond my feeble Muse...
very, very well done, sir!
Blessings! Tammy
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