I feel the tears roll down my cheek
They turn cold in the midnight air
I see you walking away
I try to scream but I have no voice
I try to run after you but I can’t move my legs
I can’t feel my body at all
I don’t understand you said you loved me
What happened?
I can feel the warmth leaving my body
My eyesight is beginning to blur
I see you stop in the distance
You are joined by a woman
You both turn around and walk back to me
You’re laughing
Both of you are laughing
You grab me by the throat
You pull me to my feet
You say you never loved me
You never cared about me
I whisper that I still love you no matter what
You and her laugh even harder
You remove the dagger you thrusted into my heart
You give it to her
You drop me to the ground
Surrounded be my own blood
You and her laugh even more as you turn to leave
I feel my crimson tears roll down my cheeks
They turn cold in the midnight air
I see you and her walking away
I try to scream out but I am already dead
My body goes cold and limp
My eyes are blurred
Then I am surrounded by darkness
Now I am gone.
Author notes
I hop eyou enloy this^_^
A contest entry
- Tainted Souls by adidaswrits.
360 points, ended March 16, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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i love it
i love the feeling that im there.. like its apart of me.. i love the flow of the words and you did a wonderful job with this one...
"I can feel the warmth leaving my body
My eyesight is beginning to blur
I see you stop in the distance"
love it..
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wow
i really did enjoy it thank you so much
its like the opposite of my style
in a good way lol
i loved it all the way through
miya
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Tahnk you very much. I'm glad you like it^_^
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