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Cheaters Revenge

I've wasted my life
just trying my best
when it comes to loving you
I gave my heart a rest.
Lying is a game
one you play very well
the girl on your arm
was quite a story to tell.

Love is a strong word
something that should always be meant
whenever I think of your lies
I'm just filled with contempt.

Did you think i didn't know?
it's kind of hard to ignore
when you hear your own lovers moans
and at least another four.

I gave you my innocence
I gave you my life
and i even promised one day
I could be your loving wife.

But you passed up that chance
cheating isn't part of my game
because when it comes to you,
you're the only one to blame.

Remember me in thirty years
when you're alone in some dirty cell
because then you might realize
I've also got quite a story to tell.

Please be as honest as possible, but not to the point where you're just cruel. Be fair, and thanks!

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  • evelynxxoo
    March 16, 2008
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    its hard to get over a betrayel i hope he knows what he lost the grass is not always greener on the other side


  • he broke me
    March 14, 2008
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    i'm so sorry that you had this happen to you... i loved your poem it was really good... your rhyming was great...

    "Lying is a game
    one you play very well
    the girl on your arm
    was quite a story to tell. "
    i liked these lines..

    xxx he broke me