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Falling

I'm still falling
Falling desperately into you.
And the quiet ease is
Haunting me still.
I can feel myself growing distant
From logic I built in blocks around me.
The faith I place in you
Astounds me to pieces until
I am my own stranger.

I'm still falling
Falling desperately in love with you.
And the rapid change in return
Is haunting me still.
Silent satisfaction leaves me
Breathlessly awaiting you.
Inside I boil and feel the rush
Of crimson flow into my cheeks.
The loyalty I place in you
Astounds me to pieces until
I am my own stranger.

I think I'm fading
Fading
Fading into my own self
-- The self you made me
                        become.

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  • he broke me
    March 14, 2008

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    loved it... really good write
    "I'm still falling
    Falling desperately in love with you.
    And the rapid change in return
    Is haunting me still."
    really loved those lines, love the last stanza as well
    xx he broke me