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Heart's Verses, Mind's Reply

The final thing
That would settle the score
No one would think
We would fall for

Its to late now
The plan has been wrote
All the bad thoughts
Will soon be smote

Now you take back
All the hard words
This you may say
But it won't heal the hurts

Wait hold on now
Can this be solved
These are the thoughts
Which should not be revolved

So I will wait
Until the start
For the untiy
Of my mind and my Heart

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I wish for nothing but the connection of me and some other male human being which i can cherish

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  • dirtyhippy
    March 16, 2008

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    yes!!!!

    this one is good bc it seems like you really put your heart into it! and i love that! again your amazing at writing!

  • celadia
    March 14, 2008
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    Great, real simple and says it all, really fantastic.