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Brand New

You've become brand new.
No longer self glorified.
Denied yourself to take up His cross.

His silent whisper screams Stand Here By Me
and you'll never want nothin' more.

So the moment that you fall -
look at the stars, see how you're loved


I know that you still feel like you're waiting for your star to be lit up, but -


How does it feel, to know that you've hit rock bottom?
How does it feel to scream without a sound?
And how do you know your life has been so grounded
until you try learning to fly?

Why are you still waiting?
Look into the heavens.
Pray for your redemption.
The dark days are over, your new life has begun.

You've become brand new.

Author notes

Rough draft of a song I'm writing. I may come back here and change it once my friend is done setting it to music.

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  • WanderingOdyssey
    January 25

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    "And how do you know your life has been so grounded until you try learning to fly?"

    That line got me, big time. I look forward to seeing the finished product, I really liked this one