Our souls shot together
When by chance, two separate glances received
The same majestic dream, and weaved
One complete, endless seam
Our souls shot together!
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Perfect for an inscription on a gift...
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I love how you ended it with the same line you began it with, but it wasn't that obvious that you did it. The lines inbetween them were so strong, I didn't notice the last and first lines were the same until I reread the poem. The flow is also really nicely done, with the similar-sounding words of the second to fourth lines ^-^
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timeless
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