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To think

And to think I wrote
a poem about you,
played a song about you.

Distracted by the colour in your eyes.
Fantasy is closer than reality
sometimes.

I could have slept
instead I dreamt

I could have left
instead I waited

For you to be who I imagined.

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  • fantasysmurf
    March 16, 2008
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    Wow

    Good sh*t J. WOW. Hey got your volcano-aid kit ready? So, did not know that Auckland had random volcanos! Ahem.. Back to your awesome write, it's brilliant. This 'Dream Boi' sounds like an infatuatingly hot guy. Keep it up and are they teaching Volcano-Aid at the st. johns?