You were my happily ever after
a story worth reading,
worth being told,
until you fell under her spell
-her job
equals
my pain-
Her smile, my tears,
her kiss, my fear,
everything fell apart
when you fell for her
-head
over
heels-
But no word was spoken
a lie I lived [loved]
you see me tonight
lean in for a kiss
and you’re blood trickled
smoothly down my wrist
-I guess
love
KILLS-
A contest entry
- PIF Contest by XxshadowedcherryxX.
500 points, ended March 28, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Powerful
I love how mighty powerful and wicked yu made that ending Sweets. I really love just how depe you penned your poem here and even more so how you worded your poem. you broke it down beautifully and really showed how much of an impact your poetry makes upon us viewers. any ways excellent work all round and keep up the very good work as always and good luck with the contest. you already know who =-P
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