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She

I never thought this would happen
Everything went so wrong
Now I am fighting to stay alive
Fighting to stay strong

When this started
I loved you for sure
Until I found out
What you were doing with her

I never knew
I could feel like this
And after it all
I still long your kiss

Even though she knows how you feel
She knows your every touch
And even though you hurt me
I can’t help but want you this much

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  • shuvi
    March 19, 2008
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    Ouch, hurts.

    Expressive, though cliche(yes, sorry!)

    much luck, shuvi