A young Irish lad named O’Neald
bought stock and had his pockets peeled.
The shares he was sold
in an mine filled with gold
turned out to be a sham rock field.
Author notes
A "twofer"! Both a bad limerick and a bad pun (LOL). Happy St. Paddy's Day!
A contest entry
- St Patricks Limerick-Pic Options by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended March 18, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - St. Patrick's Day by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended March 24, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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this is cute!
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Charming
Very nicely done! The play with words are excellent. Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest. -
silly
I didn't think it was a bad pun, it was well thought out, and funny. As always!
Cheryl
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