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Worth Loving

I'm still trippin a little off your dad callin you a mistake
but baby you were made to exist, and I'm glad God let you stay
and now I find that I pray for YOU more than I do for me
so obviously, there's something about you worth loving.

Aside from the meticulous precision and care that God took to create
the mesmerizing composition of your body, mind and face
baby I love you more each day, but forgive me
if I can't find exactly what it is that makes you worth loving

... Baby, when I was on the brink of tears telling you how much I wanted you to stay
and that I didn't truly WANT us to take a break, you actually reached to my face
and from my left eye, you wiped one of my tears away, and to THAT I didn't know what to say
Cause I never had a woman show me she cared in such a way

And what's WORTH LOVING about you is that you're a young, smart, beautiful, black woman
you're sassy, classy, clean and feisty, sweet and goofy, tender and loving
and baby, you bleed the same color I do, the same color blood that flows through MY veins
baby, I'm a man and you're a woman and anything other is inhumane
and besides, you deserve to be loved like anyone baby, you don't need all that pain
and you're worth loving, because you're willing to love me better so our progress won't be in vain,
and also you still love me even after I'd pushed you too hard to improve and change your ways
and last but not least, what makes you worth loving is that you've been ripped off a lifetime of love and affection, and now with you, me and God, that debt can now be overpaid

I love you girl!

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I wrote this for my girl

You ever wonder what it is about you that's worth loving?

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  • Expression
    March 19, 2008

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    ok ok i see you on this one...this is real nice....soooo im guessin yall back together?? anyway yea nice job done lol


  • HeartBr8ker
    March 15, 2008
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    Wow

    That is all I can say. If you havn't shown her this then do so as soon as possible!!!!


  • Aurielle
    March 15, 2008

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    And what's WORTH LOVING about you is that you're a young, smart, beautiful, black woman
    you're sassy, classy, clean and feisty, sweet and goofy, tender and loving
    and baby, you bleed the same color I do, the same color blood that flows through MY veins
    baby, I'm a man and you're a woman and anything other is inhumane
    and besides, you deserve to be loved like anyone baby, you don't need all that pain
    and you're worth loving, because you're willing to love me better so our progress won't be in vain,
    and also you still love me even after I'd pushed you too hard to improve and change your ways
    and last but not least, what makes you worth loving is that you've been ripped off a lifetime of love and affection, and now with you, me and God, that debt can now be overpaid

    this was so deep ato me and real emotional. I nevr saw it like that. Wow i got to bookmark this. It so from the heart and it brought out some points here I never thought off...


  • just mercedes gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This is great, all the reasons why she is worth loving. I hope she listened, this is worth listening to, and would surely build up self-esteem, it's warming just to read it. Well written expression of love and care.

  • Wisdom 1
    March 15, 2008
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    Worth seen clearly

    sound so knowledgeable on the love of a mother and child. That was nice write on.

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