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Come Back

your killing me....
can't you see the way i look at you
can't you see how much i love you
I feel like your pulling away
but i want you to stay....

you left this feeling inside of me
that one kiss hooked me
please come back to me....

Please tell me what you think

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    January 28

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    awwww!!!
    beautiful! ... i'm gonna hug you for writing this. how come i've never read any of your stuff before? mwahahahaha i win this time!
    seriously though, i feel for you.
    i haven't gotten over...
    *gulp*
    her...

    great write.

    kassie


  • GuitarPickSuicide
    April 3, 2008
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    hugs Love always comes back honey