Strong winds blow
Tarring lives apart
The funnel nears the town
Crashing down again
Panic fills the air
For lives are being lost
No one here is safe
Things are falling
Leaving nothing behind
This is weather
These are tornadoes
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE PROMPT- 10 POETS 40 WORDS- This is to PIF for PIF contest I won Gold for from Penmans Contest by Roaddog Wolf.
450 points, ended March 15, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Good? or Bad?
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wow. what a vivid and strong description of a tornado.
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nice write (don't need caps starting every line, need punctuation and 'tarring' I believe should be 'tearing') enjoyed the read though Thank you for entering the contest and good luck
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yea I stink at spelling sorry I'll go fix that!!!
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oh now i see why you reserved, its in a contest!....gosh what a visual... -Gore good luck!
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HOLA SENOR SENIOR...haha
so um i dont get it........but you still get this:
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