Wild sea, you toss me all about
Your waves are so high, I can hear them shout
Wild sea, please don’t take me
I am at your mercy, allow me to go free
Wild sea, splashes in my face
You make me hang on, In this slippery place
Wild sea, salt in my eyes
The storm is raging, dark are the skies
Wild sea, you scare me so
Your power so great, It’s more than I know
A contest entry
- anything goes 10 lines of poetry by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - C by Living-Out-Loud.
800 points, ended August 23, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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the rhyming seems a little forced. good luck. -living
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very good
liked this, well done and thanks. full of life, nice one -
A nice write, well penned. All the best in the contest with it
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