The Moon Looked Down Apon Them
As They Lay Below It's Shining Friends
Staring Up At The Dead and The Alive
Their Hands Together - Love Flying Around
They turned their heads - Their Eyes Met
The Rug Beneath Them Twisted As They Turned
Sudden Sounds Settled Beneath The Shadows
Moments Later, They Lie Exhaling
Returning Their Thoughts To Those Dots
That Moment To Stay Forever - A Picture Painted
Author notes
Off the Top of My Head - Kind of a dream Lol
A contest entry
- anything goes 10 lines of poetry by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like the second line, is it making a reference to the stars? Good idea if that's what it meant haha X]
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A great poem, I like the ending especially. All the best in the contest with it
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nice stuff
well written, well done, like 'a picture painted'
thank you
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