Maybe im not happy;
But I dont know.
Do you think that im happy?
See the tear stains on my pillow.
Even though I smile
My thoughts died with you.
My head is in a tornado
Where chaos has settled through.
Is it too late to recapture
That old photograph?
Is it too late to reframe
My life from the past?
Or am I again dreaming?
Beause Im beginning to feel drowsy
Im so unsettled in my life
Forever in melancholy.
Please tell me what you think
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Even though I smile
My thoughts died with you.
My head is in a tornado
Where chaos has settled through.
the last two lines of this stanza have such amazing imagery. they are definitily my favourite lines in the poem. very well written.
Laura. -
wow
that was written beautifully written. i love the second stanza when you say "Even though I smile, My thoughts died with you. My head is in a tornado
Where chaos has settled through." i can so relate
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i love the 3rd paragraph
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