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Is it me

 

 

 

 Am I, in every breath you take

 the whisper in the wind

 that sings your name,

 Am I, the one that caresses

 the core of your soul

 And if dreams really came true

 would I be with you ~~~

 

 

Am I, the first and last,

of all your thoughts

The only sight you see

 Is it me?

Am I, your every need

all that's meant to be

the reason you live,

Is it me?

 

 I want to be all that matters

Apart of all that you do

It's my purpose to complete you

make you whole and all your dreams come true

If you let me, I'll always be there

no matter the reason, time, or season

I'll love you, with all that I am ~~~

 

 

Am I, the first and last,

of all your thoughts

The only sight you see

Is it me?

Am I, your, every need

all that's meant to be

the reason you live

Is it me?

 

I want to plant kisses in your heart

and grow, and grow, in your love

It's your whole being,

that  I crave so much

And if you shall ever cry

let me drown in your tears

Grow old in love, with me, my love ~~~

 

 

Am I, the first and last

of all your thoughts

The only sight you see

Is it me?

Am I, your every need

all that's meant to be

the reason you live

Is it me/?

Is it me?

Is it me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • upperworld06
    March 17

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    I want to plant kisses in your heart
    and grow, and grow, in your love
    that's awesome, kind of pictured it as a slower song, am i right? thanks for entering and good luck


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 2, 2008

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    This is awesome my friend and I am so
    glad that I decided to click on it.
    Congratulations to you on your gold
    trophy my friend. A splendid piece
    with a lot of emotions in it. Good
    luck to you here and keep up the
    wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    A beautiful Love song
    I am sure you know that
    Thank you for the entry and Good Luck in the contest.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • Mykeee
    March 29, 2008

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    Very sweet. The repetitive questioning reveals a bit of the insecurities of the character as well as the pleading of emotion. Very strong and true. Nicely done. And congrats on the HM


  • EmmaLuLu
    March 29, 2008
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    great!

    very nice!


  • BeautifulFlame
    March 24, 2008

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    Joyce

    This is so amazingly beautiful! Your talent is a gift from God.
    I know the poetry comes from a beautiful soul, you are held in high regards by many ...including me.

    Hugs,
    ~Lisa~


  • Endeavor gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    Excellent


    Am I your, every need
    all that's meant to be
    the reason you live,
    Is it me?


    Caring questions you pose
    All very beautiful
    in this crafting of words

    Lovely Joyce

    Rick


  • Darkened Seraph
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow, amazing simple amazing joyce. Often i lose interest in a long winded poem due to small attention span lol But this, this basically had me in tears, I could read this over and over and not get bored of this, it is soo beautiful. It makes me think and feel how much I love my girlfriend, although I'm young (18) I have been thinking of asking her to marry me, and this is exactly how I feel about her. The repeated stanza i can relate to soo well, its absolutly stunning it ends the poem perfectly. Can I have permission to read it alowed to my college poetry society and share how beautiful this is? I really loved this well done Joyce

    Much love and care Jem


  • Ephiphany
    March 19, 2008

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    Beautiful

    very lovely sis, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    E


  • Mallig gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    Oh, this is wonderful! So romantic, a beautiful love song, very smooth flow.


  • Yumi
    March 18, 2008

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    Beautiful. It touches my heart in a way I've never known. This is a wonderful masterpiece of emotions and thoughts. Not only do you care, but I know you care. That's not something everyone can do. Wonderful work.

    Erica ^.^


  • michellemybelle gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    sighs...
    Joyce, this is so beautiful. This is love, in it's true form, unconditonal, strong yet gentle. You just have this wonderful way of expressing love, it is one of your gifts. Thank you for sharing this!
    love and
    Michelle


  • ennovy silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    Hey you have composed a beautiful lyric here, as I read i could easily pick up a tempo for the words...These words beat with your heart... ful of love.....Dynamic question too! "Is It Me?" I loved this song.....novy


  • StarEyes
    March 15, 2008

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    Twinsy,

    Now tell me, who could say no to this? I am jealous! I wish I would have wrote this one, a long time ago
    Seriously Twinsy, this is beyond words!! What a great write this one is! I hope you get all the right answers to this one! Ones that I would hope for myself!

    Best of luck in this contest!!!


    and love

    Nyetta


  • kennethlaney
    March 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    This was great Joyce! I'm just sorry that I didn't write it. But I can do this. If you will allow me. FOR SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM OF QUESTIONS THERE SHOULD BE AN ANSWER. I can write a part 2 if you will let me.

    It would go somethimg like this:

    Yes my love, to the questions that you ask.
    Every breath I take is sweeter because of you.
    My world revolves around you as the moon to the earth.
    With each wind comes the wisper of your name. And yes, my darling, we both share the same dream of togetherness.

    You are my first, my last and all in between.
    Without you there would be no me. I live only for
    the purpose of your touch.
    Your touch means more than words
    in any language heard. For it is the desire
    to be with you that is my lifs' motivation.

    There is no matters such as the matters or us two.
    Nothing else holds a candle to the brightness
    that you give to my heart. You are my Winter,
    as well as my Spring, my Summer and my Fall.
    You are the seasons of my life, my all and all.
    To be cont>






  • trista gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Joyce, this is absolutely beautiful! You have such an awesome way with expressing how I think most of us feel and want to be in a relationship. Even though most of your words reflect what you are willing to give this special person while asking very little in return, there's evidence of both give and take in your words.

    Just so you know, I am totally jealous of your talents at the moment! I wish I could express my feelings so clearly and beautifully. (Or at this point express anything at all ) I can even picture this on a greeting card. Some people might not see that as a compliment, but to me, it's a sign of writing that would resound in anyone who has ever been in love.

    Have I said how much I love this??? It definitely deserves to be put to music, and I think...yep, my new favorite by you!

    Much love,
    ~J.

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