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Fridays arrive with parcels: Lost and Found

 

 

 

have you ever picked up the phone

or placed your hand over the receiver

waiting in that pause



Pause/click:

yours was a presence

it had been there

on the                                                  end

 

but

after the box arrived

with every item, every card

every gift sent

with what had been my love

 

i finally unwrapped

you

 

                                        return to sender-

 

this is not Elvis singing hopefulness

love's spurned songs

this is an immature man's idea

of spirituality

 

my inner eye turned

slashed photographs in my mind

and I wished him

away

 

away

 

                                       away damn spot

 

and my true

heart

healed

by people who know

where my Northern light is

 







 

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  • Elora Danon gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    i love your light

    e~


  • DogFish silver member
    March 15, 2008
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    ...open a bottle of wine and put on some sad music, it's going to be a long weekend.

  • Suzanne Dia
    March 15, 2008

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    yes yes yes yes yes

    there is no spirituality in what he did
    it was hurtful, spiteful, and cruel..

    you wishing the anger away

    that is spiritually beautiful.

    hold the box

    we'll burn it together. i have things to add as well.




  • Rowan gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This is perfect in intent, and style. I know how you feel; and I'm sad, but glad, you saw the light.
    Love ya girlfriend, pen it out!


  • misselaineous
    March 15, 2008

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    if you were yorkshire i'd say it were yer yorksher grit love!
    home is where the heart truly is
    this is powerfully healing i hope
    elain


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    I could type a lot of Afrikaans swear words here and I know you would understand them all, Gilly.... yeah, my friend... you know I know and understand...

    This is more than words, this is your heart, big and beautiful on this page but most of all your LIGHT. You have it, it's yours always and I have come to know and love your light, your spirit, your beauty, your talent, your heart and that inner-eye that is turned towards tomorrow now.

    Love you, Gilly



    ~ Nicolette


  • Wandika gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    The dog!

    The Northern Lights of Manchester?

    Another write a bit different from your norm. I still enjoyed the unique style of you. Seldom duplicated here on AP.

    Jim

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    The Poetess adds another day to her Book of Days and shows the reader Exodus. The title is perfect as an introduction, as part and parcel of the piece and as a summary of the piece. The Poetess is known for skilled characterization, within this piece there is clarity, the elucidation of two lights, one within the character that blew itself out and one, one that shines from within and around the other the " Northern light" Particularly liked the inclusion of the reference to the song by Elvis and the flip reversing of it, as if what was once the "a" side has now become the "b" A powerful piece.Well done indeed.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    damn it, don't you ever have a bad day at writing??? lol Oh, how I envy your muse...love, lane

  • grm
    March 14, 2008

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    at least he had to pay for shipping...

    small consolation, i know, but hey, smoke 'em if you got 'em.


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    "where my Northern light is"

    Sighhh...How could anyone miss it??? Its brilliance is so profound, I can see it from across the big pond, my Friend. Beautifully, sorrowfully, soulfully penned. Wanda


  • layla.
    March 14, 2008

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    "hurt" should be "miles away" if it is THAT insensitive. your Northern light is beautiful, it shows where to find you.


    love you gilly.

    • NurseChilly gold member
      March 14, 2008
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      thanks dollygirl........ this is part of the healing having you and the rest of the girls around to support and love and laugh with

      i am healing with you all

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